Matt Bellamy

I like this. I like how you compared the cycle of falling in and out of love to being reborn. It's a very simple poem, and you didn't need to ...

I really like this! Especially the second stanza, and what the sister says and how she looks while she's doing it. One thing I would say is that when you ...

Hey! You use description really well in this piece, I can imagine really clearly what you're talking about. I'm not sure why her freedom would mean your destruction, so I ...

I really like this. I like how you started in the present and then went back in time. Your rhyming is a bit simple in places but it doesn't sound ...

Wow. I love your writing style. You say things in such a unique way that I wouldn't expect. I really don't have anything to critique, your description is so beautiful ...

Haha, I like this. It really does lighten the mood and it's very cute and catchy. It does sound a little bit repetitive but that's just the style of the ...

Hi! This is good. I like how you compare the girl to plastic flowers, and the concept of not being really alive or dead. You use description really well in ...

Hey! This could be a great poem but it needs a bit of tweaking. I think the main problem is that some of it is worded awkwardly. It seems like ...

This is a sweet poem, very cute. However, you need to work on your grammar. Capitalise your I's, and there are places where you said then instead of than, quiet ...

Hey! I really like this, and mainly because I didn't expect the twist that you had killed your mother. I like the rhyming because it makes the poem sound cheerful, ...

Hi! I really like this. I love how you changed the mood towards the end, and I liked your rhyming. The rhyming could be better though, there are some places ...

Hi! I thought this was a nice idea - something of beauty distracts you from feeling bad about whatever, and you describe it. I like it. However, you change from ...

Hey! I thought this was really well written, but I didn't get the title either, and I wasn't really sure what you were talking about. But that doesn't seem to ...

Hey! I really like this poem. It sounds very young and cute! I think that's because of the rhyming - like Boo said, we could tell what you were going ...

Hi! I like the simplicity of this poem. At first I thought it could do with some description but I think that the lack of description makes it easier to ...